A great improvement on the step by step effect!
Things you would play with if you want:
- multiple flashes for the lightning effect
- do a "fade from white" so the body appears as the flash dissipates rather than appearing during the flash
- I don't think the filling in the polygons effect is effective at that scale, I would choose between the lightning and the fill-in, or experiment with reducing the change in scale from fetus to adult
- The unfolding from the fetal position to standing bothers me somehow, probably the physics thing, I would experiment with a z-rotation to head on, and then standing, or drop the fetal position, which is kind of out of scope of the program anyway
- Perhaps also keep the body centered instead of growing in the upper half and then expanding
- The fade to black causes some visual confusion because the body appears to go from in front of the ring to behind it due to the fade, since the final H is within the circle perhaps keep the human within the circle
- I would play with trying to make the Divinci reference stronger, although the spread legs present a challenge
- I don't like the way the shadow of the feet breaks the circle, try it without the shadow
You only go to the young man age, you could experiment with continuing the aging to old age, followed by the fade out
Those are just immediate thoughts/reactions and may or may not be worthwhile.
I just noticed Wolgade's sequence, in that regard I think you could just avoid having the fade back to dark of the baby, keeping him well lit after the lightning fades. Also, extending the aging could allow for, for example, showing weight gain with aging, to demonstrate that MakeHuman allows for more than just the "ideal" body type, which seems to be a limitation of some other software. The downside might be reduced visual appeal...
And just because I have a talent for coming up with stupid ideas, thinking about the possibility of showing additional functionality through extending the aging, it occurred to me to have morphing/fading clothing that follows the aging of the character as a way to show off the clothing functionality. Just because I'm sure that you have a few months of time with nothing better to do.